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Re: darker times
I loved it. I didn't like the capitalised line though, perhaps you could only capitalise some of it, or use italics instead. Loved "It makes a tear drop from my ...
Dec 19, 2004 -
Re: When Eternity isn’t Forever
It was beautiful and it hurt. Love and hate. The borders of the plainest page Cut me off. I promised I wouldn’t write about you And never mention your name. ...
Dec 16, 2004 -
Re: immortality?
I liked the first stanza, but the second one kind of lost my attention. It picked up again after that, though. Not sure what salad days is all about, but ...
Dec 16, 2004 -
Re: One Word Story Book
Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles on ...
Dec 11, 2004 -
Re: One Word Story Book
Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles on ...
Dec 11, 2004 -
Re: One Word Story Book
Of course, go right ahead. Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving bird's poop and ...
Dec 9, 2004 -
Re: Give Her Wings
Good. Not really my thing, but I specifically liked the last two lines of the first stanza and the last lines of the last stanza. Good work.
Dec 8, 2004 -
Re: Drowned
aching for a Man who doesn't ache back *** i know exactly how good it would be to simply drift Away and Never Return Loved the first quote, it really ...
Dec 8, 2004 -
Re: Why I Hate Liking You
I hate that I constantly notice you, But when I’m around, you’re blind. I can relate completely. I think a lot of people can. Also, "Knowing that ‘we’ may never ...
Dec 8, 2004 -
Re: Apathy
Undeniable that there is A certain attraction in arrogance An arrogance that lacks aggression But still, something that makes a boy a guy But a guy not yet a man ...
Dec 8, 2004
